Like every other night
It was dark but had a pinch of white .
There sat a person
who had tears in his eyes .
He looked at the women he loved
and wished her a happy birthday .
with smile on his face and tears on its way
He passed on the card he made .
It was filled with old memories ,
their pictures ,a number of pages of different diaries ,
every little thing she once said ,
also a cute picture with her cheeks red.
The card was made of love
But the girl’s reply was rough .
she didn’t say anything
But it didn’t make the guy feel bad .
He choose to be happy rather than sad .
It was time for dinner
He got the candles and light them all over .
It was a beautiful sight
But the girl was still quiet
There were people around
who made the laughing sound.
everything was smooth
But something weird they all found.
The guy ignored them too
He fixed his heart with a glue
and managed to smile again
He hid his pain
and was back again .
He danced with her till twelve
The girl didn’t say a word till then .
The guy made a cross in the calendar with a pen .
He fell down on his knees after that .
and cried .
He didn’t cry because the girl was quite .
because he knew at this point he can’t expect light from any side .
He knew the girl won’t speak at all .
after all He spent the whole night with her picture
imaging it was her , talking about future .
And when the night got over .
bursted the lover .
“I did it ”
he shouted .
“I kept the promise ,which I made to you ”
He was happy and sad at the same time .
and with mixed emotions he rhymed –
” I did It
I didn’t cry for a day
I didn’t think that you left me alone in the way
I did my best to be happy
I did my best to keep my promise for a day .
I tried to be fine even when a word you didn’t say .
I hope I made your birthday special.
though I wish instead of this picture in my hand
I could have had your hand .
So what you’re away
I hope you’re smiling looking at my efforts today .
I hope you’re feeling proud of me today.
But it was hard for me to do this .
It was really hard to grant your last wish
which was to be happy without you .
which was to smile without you .
But I somehow did it .
I so wanted to see you at this moment .
But its okay
the thought of you feeling good because of me
is enough for me to feel the sun rays .
I’ll try doing it again to make you smile
even if people laugh on me every time
Even if you stay quiet.
Even if it is hard
Even if it pains my heart .
As I can do anything for you.
My love for you is true .”
After saying this he stood up again .
wiped all his pain
Kissed the picture .
And with tears in his eyes he began to smile all over again.
Very nice…
Really touching anf it does makes one feel the love for her..
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Thamkyou so much .your comments always make me feel good.
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Always my pleasure..
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wow, powerful piece, the emotions in this piece are just palpable
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Thankyou so so much :’)
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My pleasure
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I’m sure that many could relate to this sad condition..
Nicely written..
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So nice to hear this .Thanks a lot .
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Overwhelming words!
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Thankyou ๐
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Hey long time !! I just loved this.. U touch my soul with such a beautiful poem
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Hi ๐
Thankyou so much :’)
This means a lot.
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Excellent
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Thankyou :*
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Pretty good
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Thanks a lot ๐
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Pleasure ๐
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Best you’ve ever written. Love ya.
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More ๐๐
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So incredibly touching. ๐
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Thankyou so much โบ๐
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You’re so welcome! ๐
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So beautiful
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Thank you so much :’)
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Wonderful and really touching !!
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Thankyou so much ๐
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Such a beautiful piece of work
The words are full of passion
Loved it
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Thankyou so much Charvi ๐
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Really sweet and heart touching ๐
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Thankyou so much :’)
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You are welcome ๐ Do take a look at my blog. Would love to know your opinion ๐
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Wow! So touching!
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So wonderfully written,awesome I can feel this๐๐ and I am thankful to you for stopping by my page that lands me here to wonderful page of yours๐
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Thanks A lot .
I am happy you could relate to it .
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A story weaved in beautiful poem.
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Thankyou :’)
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Welcome๐
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This was something really amazing. Siddhi Di, Love you.
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Thankyou so much Sehaj ๐
This made me real happy .
Love you more ๐
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Nice to meet you and many thanks for the follow. ๐
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Thanks a lot :’)
I really appreciate it.
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Very nice, I liked it a lot. We all have to smile and go on living.
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Exactly .
Thanks a lot ๐๐
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Incredible work. Master piece
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Please follow the blog at http://waragainsteatingdisorder.com We have moved
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Sure :’)
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Hey, this is amazing. Really.
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Thankyou so much .
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This one is really good. Do you post on Instagram?
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Not yet . But I am thinking to . ๐
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How do I contact you??
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My insta username is siddhi1801.
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Deeply moved by these verses…can’t stop myself following you siddhidikshaโบ
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Thanks a ton ๐
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Wow lovely โค
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Thankyou ๐
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Really beautiful and touching poem.
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Thankyou so much :’)
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I know this what women want: Love. But I wonder if there is a man who knows love. Men think Love is Sex. No Sex Means No Love. But a day will come when men will know love. Till then, I’ll assume she was his mom.
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This is deep :’)
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“He fell down on his knees after that and cried.”
It seems you don’t know that men harden their hearts and “grow up” since their early teens?
MEN DO NOT CRY.
Maybe you know that but you wish they did. But they don’t.
“Hearts of men are evil and their minds are deceptive”, quoting from Bible.
But if she were his mom, then he’ll cry and also know love. Do you know why? Because all boys are good in the sight of God, Most High till age 12. That’s why.
But women are not made from dirty dust. They’re made from their soul mate’s rib so they’re clean and never harden their hearts and cry like babies and know love (God) and seek love.
Only your soul mate will love you and he’ll love you for eternity and you’ll take out all evil from his heart as my Monia did to me.
So keep all strange men away. Use a duster! Don’t wear make up nor seek strange flesh and wait for your soul mate who’ll come knocking on your door.
If you’re wearing make up, he’ll get confused because the picture in his heart is without make up. Good luck.
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Love is never easy. This sounds like complicated, difficult love, but not hopeless.
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Exactly :’)
Thanks for reading
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If music is the language of the soul. Your poem is music.
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Thankyou so much .
This made me real happy
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Wow that was incredible and I mean it……
Touching…..
Keep writing….. (PLEASE LOL)
PS: congrats on the 1200 follows
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Thankyou so much for this comment.
You’re probably the only person who wished me .
Thankyou .
This made my day already .
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You are welcome ๐
So where is the treat????
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On its way :p
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*Waiting waiting *
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Haha .
It’ll reach soon .
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It looks as if you are a champ of love …falling in love with your verses Siddiksha
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Thanks a lot kiranmag .
This made me real happy ๐
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Kiranmag thats my user name โบ..
My name is Kiran….I just love poetry and more of it the one who writes it โบ
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I am so sorry Kiran . My real name is siddhi .
Thanks a lot for your beautiful comments .
Your blog makes me happy like hell .
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Same feelings here too โบ …Yet to read and express my views on all of your posts …So overwhelmed by your beautiful response I have taken a break from dinner to comment..you are definately an amazing person. God bless you.
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I know I am disturbing you . But I don’t know why I find leaving food to reply me is something really sweet .
Thanks .๐
I am sure you are a wonderful person as well .
Glad to have a blogger friend like you .
Hugs .
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Same feelings here too …yes in fact I loved this poem very much you can see my comment on this post on 31st july …i tried to follow you that day ..but bieng a newbie ..i couldnt…but its my goodluck that you followed me …glad and overwhemed here too …sending a lot of postive vibes and hugs and lots of โค
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I am happy we found eachother .
I really like the way you write things .
It’s really soothing.
Thanks for each and every comment you wrote today .
When I meet people like you I feel really good.
Keep in touch.
Lots of love โค
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Of course dear Siddhi โบ …expressing a deep sense of gratitude from the bottom of my heart. Good night.
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Good night .๐
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Amazing…! Loved it..๐
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Thanks a ton ๐
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Wow, coincidence I must say, I just happened to write an article on the same topic. Your poems are incredible. I love how every line brings out every unexplainable emotion we all feel. Great work! Please check mine out ๐
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Thankyou so much .
I’ll surely visit your blog ๐
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Thank you
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Awesome writing!”loved it. If you don’t mind you should check out my page also!
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I would love to ๐
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This was absalutely heartfelt; thank you.
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Thankyou so much :
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It’s amazing
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Thankyou๐
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